Lee Goldberg originally published The Jury Series in 1985 as .357
Vigilante under the pseudonym Ian Ludlow, while he was in college. The 2009
edition consists of not only the first three novels in the series – Judgment, Adjourned, and Payback –
it also includes Guilty, which was
never in print before.
Judgment
It’s not safe in Los Angeles. People are being senselessly
killed … like the aging lady in the midst of a middle-age crisis, like a
Chinese restaurateur, and like a long-time beat patrolman.
When LAPD patrolman James Douglas “JD” Macklin is set aflame
by members of the Bounty Hunters gang, his son Brett Macklin, owner of Blue
Yonder Airways, wants justice done. He wants the killers caught and punished.
Unfortunately, the gang members are set free when one of
their members’ mother lies and the charges are dismissed. Brett takes matters
into his own hands. Dubbed “The Jury” by the news media, Brett eliminates the
gang, plus others involved in the murder, including Mayor Breen and evangelist
Elias Simon.
Then, Brett goes quiet. Until the new mayor, Jed Stocker, resurrects
The Jury, forcing Brett to help him quell gang violence.
Adjournment
If Brett Macklin thought his days as The Jury vigilante were
over, he was badly mistaken. Mayor Stocker “recruits” him to bring down a child
pornographer named Wesley Saputo, teaming Bret with his old friend, Sgt. Ron
Shaw.
His involvement becomes not just a moral issue, it also
becomes personal when his lover, Cheshire Davis (a nurse friend of his partner
Mort Suderson’s sister) is killed when his Cadillac disintegrates in a fiery
explosion.
But Brett has terms, insisting that a third party be brought
in to evaluate evidence and determine the guilt of the intended targets. In
other words, he needs someone to validate the killings and “pass sentence” on
the targets.
Meanwhile, Jessica Mordente, a Los Angeles Times reporter, is hot on his trail, certain that she’s
identified him as The Jury. Things get complicated as they become lovers.
Payback
Someone is posing as Mr. Jury, going on a killing spree, and
LA Times reporter Jessica has been
sitting on proof that Brett is the vigilante, mostly because she’s become his
lover.
Now, however, she’s threatening to expose him, horrified
that Mr. Jury has killed a 25-year-old black boy. It doesn’t get any easier
either; Mayor Jed Stocker also is mad at him.
Mayor Stocker and Brett come up with a system that would
allow former judge Harlan Fitz to pass judgment on suspects, based on evidence
presented before him in secret. If Judge Fitz gives his nod, Brett can consider
that his authorization.
It turns out that the fake Mr. Jury has been hired by Anton
Damon, leader of white supremacy group White Wash, who’s just out of prison
after serving time for butchering a black family of three. He’s being protected
and financed by 83-year-old arch-conservative industrialist Justin Threllkiss.
Brett exacts justice, of course, in a story full of action
descriptions and rather light on story and subtlety. If nothing else, author
Goldberg succeeds in making me hate Jessie Mordente. Well, maybe “dislike
intensely” is a better term. No, “hate” does the job just fine.
Guilty
The octogenarian bigot, Justin Threllkiss, just won’t give
up. He hates Brett Macklin. So much so that he hires an international assassin
to get rid of him.
That aside, the first thing we learn in Guilty is how to kill pigeons with Alka-Seltzer. The second thing
is that Brett’s pilot and mechanic, Mort Suderman, shouldn’t have had that
tongue operation after all. And the third thing is that Brett’s girlfriend, LA Times reporter Jessie Mordente
shouldn’t have gone under deep cover to expose the Transformational Awareness
Life Church as a sex-slave-production factory.
None of the above really has anything directly to do with
the plot, but they are peripheral events that slowly turn Brett into a real
loner by taking away his friends, his lovers and his family.
Guilty has some
gratuitous sex in it – scenes that we need to take with a simmering fright in our
minds because we know it’s all just temporary pleasure. It’s all going to turn
bad in the end. There’s a lot of violence as well, highly descriptive violence
with body parts flying through the air.
But what the hell, Goldberg was just a college kid at the
time, and we all know how college kids think. I mean, that’s how I thought when I was in college.
Compared to his later works that I’ve read, Goldberg is a
lot more sexually descriptive in this series, perhaps because he was a
collegian when he wrote the stories. He probably should have been more careful
with his homophones. He’s got quite a bit of wrong word choices (i.e., Its/it’s, their/there).
The Jury Series
isn’t what I consider special. It was okay, but nothing I’d recommend, unless
you want to get an idea of Lee Goldberg’s mind-set when he was younger.
Lee Goldberg
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I cringe to think some their/there its/it's problems still remain...even after the fourth round of copyediting, this time by the same professional copyeditor who does all of my MONK books at Penguin/Putnam (and scores of others). The damn books are cursed, I tell you, cursed!
ReplyDeleteI can't disagree with your review of the books. They are my first four books, written while I was barely out of my teens, and it certainly shows.
That said, the gratuitous sex was added after my editors insisted there wasn't enough sex in the books, because I was a horny college student (though surely was). So, in anger, I went over the top with the sex. To my horror, not only did he say the scenes were hot, they were "real." Which was very depressing, because if that was real sex, then my love life really, really sucked.
As for the violence, that was a convention of the men's action adventure genre and I was encouraged by my editor... who also edited the Penetrator, the Executionner, The Destroyer, the Terminator, the Death Merchanet, etc....to go as far with it as I possible could.
Lee
" because I was a horny college student (though surely was)" should have read "NOT because I was a horny college student (though surely was)."
ReplyDeleteActually, I didn't mind the sex and violence that much, Lee. Guess I'm used to them by now. I did enjoy the compilation, and do appreciate that they were written when you were younger. You should have seen some of MY work when I was young. Yikes!
ReplyDeleteCraig
Craig, I came upon your blog on Twitter. Interesting reviews. Extremely insightful.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
ReplyDelete~ Craig